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¡Maravilloso relato! Las ilustraciones, la narración, la música... ¡todo combina a la perfección! La historia fluye y se desarrolla de manera precisa, los personajes tienen volumen, no son planos, tienen una personalidad y un carácter bien desarrollado y sin caer en clichés ni tópicos. El estilo gráfico (que me encanta, la forma en la que le has dado color a la historia es impresionante) por su parte le añade un toque más a la historia que junto a la música son la guinda del pastel, una combinación perfecta (^0^)/ ¡No cambiaría nada de ella! 

¡Muchísimas gracias! ¡¡Me alegro mucho de que te haya gustado!! ^-^

Beautiful story. I love how the magic works in this world (...if I understood it...). Hope to hear more from it!

Oh, thank you so much for playing!! I love planning how magic and all of the fantasy stuff works in each of my stories, so I'm glad you liked it <3

The Final Day of Spring is a pleasant kinetic novel! 

The visuals are amazing, especially of the scene where the girl was drooling in awe at the night sky. I smile fondly whenever I think of it.  Moreover, I like how the credits was shown, simple and flows well with the art. It made me feel like the ending was dawning into a warm closure as a breeze comes by.

The casts are like-able! I like how perceptive and curious the girl was, and I love how Eli was not a typical wise old lady. The girl's thoughts about names surprised me and she is truly something hehe. I would love to follow her adventure if there is more!

Thank you for making this novel and I look forward to more~

Ahhh, thank you so much for this review!! ♡ I love hearing what others think about the characters *-* 
Actually, I do have a sequel planned which will be "about Summer" (? but I have another project I want to finish before that~ Anyway! It makes me really happy that you would be interested in reading the continuation to the girl's adventures :'D

I enjoyed it, thank you for the story! :D

I'm glad! You're welcome, thank you for playing  ^_^

I love this. Everything the characters, plot, and story line. 

Aw, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you liked it!! ^-^/♡

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Great Narrative story i really enjoyed it

Hey, thank you so much for trying it out! I'm glad you liked it ^^