¡Maravilloso relato! Las ilustraciones, la narración, la música... ¡todo combina a la perfección! La historia fluye y se desarrolla de manera precisa, los personajes tienen volumen, no son planos, tienen una personalidad y un carácter bien desarrollado y sin caer en clichés ni tópicos. El estilo gráfico (que me encanta, la forma en la que le has dado color a la historia es impresionante) por su parte le añade un toque más a la historia que junto a la música son la guinda del pastel, una combinación perfecta (^0^)/ ¡No cambiaría nada de ella!
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Beautiful story. I love how the magic works in this world (...if I understood it...). Hope to hear more from it!
Oh, thank you so much for playing!! I love planning how magic and all of the fantasy stuff works in each of my stories, so I'm glad you liked it <3
The Final Day of Spring is a pleasant kinetic novel!
The visuals are amazing, especially of the scene where the girl was drooling in awe at the night sky. I smile fondly whenever I think of it. Moreover, I like how the credits was shown, simple and flows well with the art. It made me feel like the ending was dawning into a warm closure as a breeze comes by.
The casts are like-able! I like how perceptive and curious the girl was, and I love how Eli was not a typical wise old lady. The girl's thoughts about names surprised me and she is truly something hehe. I would love to follow her adventure if there is more!
Thank you for making this novel and I look forward to more~
Ahhh, thank you so much for this review!! ♡ I love hearing what others think about the characters *-*
Actually, I do have a sequel planned which will be "about Summer" (? but I have another project I want to finish before that~ Anyway! It makes me really happy that you would be interested in reading the continuation to the girl's adventures :'D
I enjoyed it, thank you for the story! :D
I love this. Everything the characters, plot, and story line.